It began with a falling ember
Oh how the soft light begged for my attention
Shrouded in darkness I listened
Fixated, I watched the fleeting light fall like a leaf in the wind
About to disappear behind the lip of a well
I quickly moved to peer over the ledge
Illuminated, I gazed at my life painted around the walls
My circle of life; challenging, cherished and ever changing
Looking further, the depths remain hidden to the small ember’s light
A craving sets in for more, I know there is more to see
As this dawn opens my eyes to the story of me
And how much remains unwritten, the potential to be
As the light dies everything is flooded by darkness
Only kept afloat by the curiosity of the deep
Unsatisfied and wanting, there is only one thing I need
To once again peer over the ledge so steep
Memory waning, I begin sinking
Staring into the barrel of a life full of unmet desires;
But refusing to succumb I search for something
For anything to bring about a new dawn
I finally found it
A flammable soul and a fiery passion
When these two things collide like a match to its box, a fire was born
The dawn had come again
Ignited, I ran to the well and climbed in
I wanted to see more, I wanted to be more
The wall before me, bright and warm from my inner glow
Chisel and hammer in hand I begin carving my own story
My canvas of life; challenging, cherished and ever changing
I begin the journey to reach my true potential
And should the fire ever expire
I will again find the passion to my soul
This toil and tussle of fighting to find me
Is truly an honorable quest with the ultimate prize
A soulful sheen brighter than any sun
A state of being whose flow ebbs with life and love
So beautiful
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Thankyouuu
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Beautifully penned ๐ฅ
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Thankyou!! ๐
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Nice work! I love this idea: “A flammable soul”. Very fresh!
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Indeed the light within, thankyou!
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Welcome!!!
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Intriguing, beautifully writtenโค
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Thankyou!
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What an inspiring poem
Thsbk you so much
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Thankyou! Your kind words mean alot ๐
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Soulful and splendid. ๐ฅฐ
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Thankyou ๐
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Love the poem and ending sheen!
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Thankyou ๐
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Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.
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Thanks for reading it!
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Beautifully written, Kamande! Thank you so much for following my blog. ๐
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Thankyou so much!! I enjoy your weekly prompts, they have already inspired some pieces I am working on ๐
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You’re most welcome, and I am glad my weekly prompts are inspiring to you. ๐
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Beautiful
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Thankyou! I am glad you enjoyed
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Captivating….felt myself floating along with the lyrics.
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I am glad, thankyou!
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My pleasure!
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“Once you discover the light within you,
the only people who need the light without to come out of darkness
are those who haven’t discovered God’s light from within them.”
_-Van Prince
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Perfectly said!
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very inspiring. ๐
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Thankyou! ๐
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Wow, this is just an amazing piece!! I am speechless! Such beautiful writing and the magical flow of your words was a joy to read! Keep shining friend, much love ๐ค
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Thankyou for taking the time to read it! I am glad you enjoyed it and am encouraged by your words ๐
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Reblogged this on johncoyote and commented:
Amazing poetry shared by a talented writer.
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Thankyou for sharing! I am glad and encouraged by your support ๐
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I enjoyed the work and good words need to be read by more people. You are welcome Kamande.
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A amazing poem. You held me to the last word.
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Thankyou!
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You are welcome.
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